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‘How do you begin a book?’

Previous posts have concerned how I feel in the middle of a book, and at the end. Now seems a good time to cover how I begin, as I’m at that stage with ‘Just for the Holidays’.

Beginning a book is a little like falling in love. I think of it when I should be thinking about something else, I don’t hear everything that’s said to me, I feel a little uncertain, a little apprehensive, a lot excited. What will happen? What if …?

Every book’s different but here, loosely, is where and how a book begins:


Ideas come to me through reading or hearing something, thinking about my past, or just, apparently, out of the ether. If an idea sticks in my mind, my subconscious plays with it. Inconveniently, the ideas my subconscious likes often come halfway through another book, so I have to try and keep the new idea bubbling on the back burner.

‘Just for the Holidays’ originated from a story told to me over a meal. My friend’s holiday with her sister had gone from bad to worse as the sister dropped bombshell after bombshell on her. I asked if I could use the idea, suitably modified, explored it a bit more, decided what would suit me and what would need to be changed, and in which sort of direction I’d take things.


My characters come to me early in the process. I begin with hero and heroine. My subconscious plays with them, too, and I find myself making decisions that I’m not completely aware of making.

For ‘Just for the Holidays’ I decided that Leah is, like me, a bit of a petrolhead. This is going to allow me to have some fun with the research, as she does track days and goes to motor sport events so, naturally, so will I have to! One big element to her character was established by the initial idea: Leah has chosen not to get married or have children. She’s a free spirit and likes her life exactly as it is. I wanted her to have a cool job and found a suitable one, one most people wouldn’t count as a job. Importantly, Leah has an older sister, Michele, who’s quite different: a teacher, married with children. Between the different lifestyles of the two sisters lies a lot of emotion and conflict.

Ronan is a grounded helicopter pilot. I’ve tried to make him something else because I’ve written about helicopters once before but he came to me as a grounded helicopter pilot and my subconscious has turned obstinate about it. Again, research is a pleasure. And if anyone would like to take me up in a helicopter, please get in touch.

The work

Now comes the part where I take these few facts and develop something bigger. I create secondary characters to impact on the hero, the heroine and the plot. I give Ronan and Leah conflicts, I explore their lives, their histories, their goals. I mull over what’s drawing them together and what will keep them apart. I look at them from the points of view of other characters – what does her sister think of Leah? What does Ronan think of her? What does her employer think of her? What does Leah think of him? What does his son think of him? etc etc. I feel this technique gives me properly rounded characters.

For some reason, I almost always plan on paper, with a pen. Maybe I think better with a pen in my hand. It’s certainly not because I like handwriting, or that my handwriting is attractive. I’m now fortunate enough to have a second desk for when I’m writing by hand.

The second desk

The second desk

On the opposite wall is an area I can use to cover with sticky notes, if that’s what seems a good idea at the time.

My planning wall with The Wedding Proposal's plot just beginning

My planning wall with an earlier book, The Wedding Proposal, just emerging

Sometimes I simply write out my thoughts and ask myself questions. At other times I create plans. This usually happens when I have a central issue and I want to explore it. The next picture is of a successful plan. I began with my central issue and explored all the outcomes I could think of, with consequences.

A successful plan

A successful plan

Here’s a plan when things became a lot less straightforward.

Not going quite so well, this time ...

Not going quite so well, this time …

It began well. But I introduced a second issue that would impact on the first and found it wasn’t working with the same logic and ease. Everything I thought of seemed to give rise to more and more to think of – hence the additional bits of paper stapled together as my exploration got too big for the page. Stuck, I paused for thought. Should I buy a new stationery tidy, now I have this second desk? Ooh, look, I didn’t realise that my long-arm stapler could extend its reach just by moving something along a bit … I clicked my pen and stared at the plan. By the end of the day all I had decided was that the second  issue wasn’t working.

During the evening, my subconscious kept drawing my attention away from the TV, my dinner, and the book I was reading, worrying at the second issue. Just as I was going to bed – bingo! I realised what was wrong with my issue (too close to something I’d used in another book) and what I could do to change it.

The important thing, to me, is that the plan did its job. Knowing when something isn’t working is as important as knowing when it is.

So, back to my second desk, this afternoon, to work on secondary character bios, drawing all the many pieces of my jigsaw together. It will probably be a couple of weeks before I feel ready to type ‘Chapter 1’ into a new Word document on my Mac. Me and my subconscious have a lot to do before that.

NB My subconscious isn’t the only thing I listen to. Conscious thought does a lot of puzzling – and an agent and/or publisher might have some input, too. 🙂



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#1 Bestseller in Contemporary Romance

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The Wedding Proposal was selected for a UK Kindle Daily Deal promotion on Wednesday – lucky me! The promotion worked so brilliantly that The Wedding Proposal actually topped the Contemporary Romance chart the following day, climbing to #10 in the Kindle Paid Chart. Joy! So far as I know, this is the best Kindle chart position that any of my books has achieved, so I was doing a happy dance all day.

I’d never even noticed before that Amazon awards your book a pretty little ribbon if it’s #1 in a chart but as soon as I was alerted I took the above screen shot to save the moment for posterity. (And to put on Facebook and Twitter and my blog.) The Wedding Proposal is a summer read, being the story of what happens when Lucas (who hates secrets) is stuck sharing a boat in Malta with Elle (who has a lot to hide) for the summer, and quite a few people told me they’d downloaded it ready for their holidays.

To add to the happiness of the day, the Summer Party of the Romantic Novelists’ Association took place at the Royal Over-Seas League in the evening. I’m tired and have a sore throat, so I know I had a good time! Congratulations to all those who were contenders for the Joan Hessayon Award, especially Brigid Coady, who was the talented winner.

Thanks to Catriona Robb for this photo of myself with Hessayon contender Nikki Moore.

Thanks to Catriona Robb for this photo of myself with Hessayon contender Nikki Moore.


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Sue’s Dos and Don’ts for professional submission of work

During my years as a competition judge for the Writers’ Forum Fiction Competition (now handed over to the fabulous Lorraine Mace), and as an editor of a couple of anthologies, I’ve encountered a some odd and off-putting ways of submitting work. Here are a few ‘don’ts’ compiled from that experience. Some of them might make you smile:


  • Send with your submission extraneous additional material such as newspaper clippings, links to the newspaper stories that prompted your idea, photographs, drawings, or letters from other competitions proving that this story didn’t win or letters from editors saying they like your work.

  • Ask for the material to be returned unless its the last copy on Earth and you will never have access to a printer for the rest of your life – especially if you don’t include a stamped self-addressed envelope. Sorry if this sounds mean but it costs you postage and costs the judge or editor time in going to the postbox.

  • Send your story printed on the other side of old material, especially if you don’t cross out said old material.

  • Send two different versions of the same story at the same time.

  • Send  two identical versions of the same story, apart from the fact that they’re printed in two different fonts. (I’m mystified by this one.)

  • Say that you decided not to pay for a critique available as part of the competition, but please could the judge tell you what’s wrong with the story?

  • Send in original and irreplaceable material related to your story (such as a letter from a now-deceased famous person), which the competition judge or editor will feel morally obliged to ensure is returned to you safely.

  • Don’t use a fancy or jokey font, or print in purple, or use orange paper.

  • Write or email to tell the judge or editor that they’re wrong if they don’t count your story as a success.

  • Write or email the judge or editor to tell them how to judge/edit properly. Especially if the letter or email is long.

I wouldn’t categorise any of the above techniques as successful. Satisfactory submission is really simple:


  • Follow the competition rules or submission guidelines. If you don’t, you’re wasting any entry fee or postage you may have paid, and your valuable time.

  • Learn about standard manuscript presentation and utilise it. There’s information on the Manuscript Preparation tab of this blog if you’re unsure. Poor presentation can detract from your work instead of allowing the judge or editor a pleasant reading experience.

Good luck!


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