Manuscript presentation

Standard fiction manuscript is important and I’m asked about it so frequently that I’ve uploaded a sample document. Click on ‘Presentation’ :

Presentation

I really wanted the document to appear, shazam! on the page, rather than as a link. But clicking the link works OK.

Presenting your manuscript to an electronic publisher

Lynne Connolly, prolific author of contemporary, historical and paranormal novels for the world of e-publishing has been kind enough to share the tricks of submitting work electronically:

Sue’s guide is excellent, especially for printed documents, but fewer publishers are asking for those these days. Not as many offices packed with towers of paper!

I keep a template for each publisher, set up the way the publisher wants it.

  • In general, headers and footers are to be avoided in the electronic version – not as much of a chance of dropping the whole shebang on the floor and needing the page numbers.
  • Single line spacing unless the publisher’s guidelines say otherwise (double spacing makes the document much bigger, and the recipient can easily change it for herself)
  • Keep the formatting as simple as possible.

A publisher asking for electronic documents is more likely (though not always) to ask for the whole thing, not just a partial (first three chapters and synopsis). It doesn’t take up space like a paper document does.

My thanks to Lynne Connolly for all that valuable stuff.

 

But, on the other hand …

I do think good manuscript presentation is important in the same way that washing your hair and shining your boots can be important when you’re attending a job interview. Editors and competition judges work with words and they notice poor presentation. The ‘rules’ are there for excellent reasons, too – double line spacing is quick and easy to read; large margins allow for notes to be made; a clear font is easy on the eye; ‘empty’ lines between paragraphs disrupt the smooth flow of your story and make the reader think they’re reading a succession of scenes instead of a succession of paragraphs. (One of the greatest disservices that the creators of Word have done to writers is to make it the default for ‘empty’ line space to appear whenever you press ‘return’. But it’s easy to fix – look at the presentation document for details.)

But what if you find good presentation a challenge?

Maybe you’re dyslexic or left school at 14 or were never at the same school long enough to learn properly?

Don’t let the preparation of the manuscript put you off. The storytelling is waaaaay more individual and creative and … and what you’re all about. You can always get someone to help you with the technicalities (offer to wash their car in exchange or something).

The story is the creative thing – the formatting is boring necessity.

 

44 Responses to Manuscript presentation

  1. Thanks, Sue, for posting this advice. Very useful/helpful.

  2. Penny

    Definitely A Good Thing, Sue! Funny, too, which always appeals.
    A neat reminder that writing somehow requires that you remain secretarial while also cutting loose with the imagination.

  3. debutnovelist

    Hi Sue – what a good way of showing us using the ‘model’. BTW I have always put my name and story title in the header with page numbers at the bottom. I didn’t know about the ‘mf’ thing. Do you prefer page numbers at top?
    AliB

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  5. Thanks for highlighting this great presentation Sue, it clears up those areas newer writers sometimes get confused with and I’ll certainly recommend this blog post to those in need.

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  7. Ruth Edwardson

    Thanks for this very useful info. However, I’m still having problems with getting the identing of paragraphs to work using Format>Paragraph function. I’ve set the indent to 0.5 cm. I started the first paragraph, with no ident, as you said, no problem. The beginning of the second paragraph indented OK but then, every subsequent line was also indented. How do I stop it doing that? Any help would be much appreciated. Thanks.

    • HI Ruth,

      Versions of Word vary but, looking at my Word for Mac, I wonder if you need to change something in one of the other boxes under Format>Paragraph. For example, in Word for Mac there’s a box called ‘special’ and that should be set to ‘first line only’. There’s also an image of how the paragraph will come out as you change things in the various boxes so you should keep an eye on that for clues as to when you’re getting it right.

      Another way would be to ignore the Format>Paragraph option and make your horizontal ruler visible, instead. (View and then tick Ruler.) The top slider on your ruler governs the indent so if you drag that along a bit (just the top one! The little triangle) then it should give you the indent if the bottom triangle stays where it is on the margin.

      • Ruth Edwardson

        All now sorted, using the first way. It all seems so logical and easy when you know what to do! Many thanks for your help.

  8. Bill Dunnakey

    Hi Sue,
    I found your manuscript presentation very useful but it raised a few more queries with me. You seem to suggest a large margin – 5 or 10cm – on the left and the normal margin – 2.5cm – on the right. My only problem with that is, being old-fashioned, I tend to keep filed paper copies of some of my stories especially if they have been commented on – this means that the file holes would go through the comments. For this reason I keep the left margin as standard and a wide margin on the right. Is this acceptable? Also is page numbering in the style ‘page 1 of 8′ acceptable in lieu of ‘mf’. For the font type is ‘Bookman Old Style’ acceptable, as opposed to the standard ‘Times New Roman’. And finally, should the text alignment be ‘Left’, giving a ragged right edge, or ‘Justified’ giving a straight right edge, to the body of the text?
    I am new to fiction writing and would like to get these basics sorted out before going much further.
    Bill

    • Hi Bill,
      Mine is just one form of standard manuscript presentation – you do find variations, such as 1 of 8 instead of mf, as you suggest.

      I’ve been and looked at the document and I feel that the margins are the same left and right – do they look different, to you? The same is standard, I feel.

      I use Bookman Old Style most of the time. It’s plain and sensible and nobody has every complained.

      Most publishers dislike justification on the right hand margin and it’s standard to set your document to the left and let the right margin be uneven. I believe this is because it’s easier for them to justify at their end.

      Hope you enjoy your writing! I think you’re wise to get your presentation as professional and ‘clean’ as possible.

      Best wishes,
      Sue

      • Bill Dunnakey

        Thank you Sue,
        That has clarified everything. I am going to set up a template in Word for my fiction writing based on that info.
        Just one other thought, if the ‘Title Page’ shows the title is there a need to duplicate the title at the start of the story? Or, have you indicated a chapter heading in your example?
        regards
        Bill

  9. Hi Bill,

    Yes, the title should be on both title page and page 1. Some magazines ask for it to be on every page. Legend has it that if they decide to buy your story they rip off the front page and give it to their accounts department to effect payment as it has all your contact details.

  10. Hi Sue,
    Thanks for this wonderful idea. Very useful. I have a question though. Being a secretary I was taught to type two spaces after a full stop. I notice in novels there doesn’t seem to be a long gap between sentences. Should we stick to one gap or doesn’t it matter? (By the way, in being so used to this practice I nearly always type two spaces, unnecesarily, at the end of every paragraph – a practice which can cause extra space between paras when the MS is sent elsewhere).

    Debs

    • Hi Debs,
      I was trained the same way but trained out of it again when I went to work for a sports paper and two spaces made a paragraph every time. V unpopular habit. Don’t think anyone likes two spaces these days. But you can easily take them out at the end doing find and replace. Just tap space bar twice in find box and once in replace box.

  11. Marc

    Hi Sue,

    I just have two questions relating to itacalising and underlining.

    In the manuscript, if I want to place particular emphasis on a single word, which would normally be italicised in print, do I italicise it or underline it?

    Secondly, if a book, newspaper, journal is referred to, which would normally italicised in print and academic writing, should it be italicised or underlined in the manuscript? Let’s say, for example, my character is reading Faulkner’s As I Lay Dying, would the title be italicised or underlined in the manuscript? Or something else?

    Many thanks for an excellent and helpful document.

    • A certain amount depends upon house style. House style is what the publisher of that book or magazine chooses to do – so one magazine will choose to italicise the title of a book but another one won’t. I usually do and if the publication doesn’t want it, they take the formatting out.

      Italics for emphasis always used to be underlined, because typewriters couldn’t italicise. But that has largely gone by the board with the advent of computers and I always use italics where I wish them to be used. I’ve even seen a blog from an editor saying, ‘Why use underline when I just have to change it to italics?’

  12. Heather Pelmore

    Thankyou Sue. Ihave just read your email on Presentation and will use a few of the points made when I send off my next manuscript.

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  15. Claire

    Hi Sue,

    I was sent your model manuscript after entering the short story competition for writeres forum, so that I could clean up my story. It’s been really useful and I’ve tried to take on board all the advice in it, so thank you very much. I just have one teeny tiny problem – the mf! I’ve been wrestling with Word trying to make it appear throughout the manuscript except on the last page using the headers and footers function, but I’m afraid Word has me in a head-lock and it’s going to floor me soon. Any advice?

    Thanks

    Claire Thomson

    • Hi Claire,
      Glad the presentation page is helpful. :-)

      In some word processing packages there is an option to change the footer for the final page – but those packages seem to be in the minority. A student did once send me instructions, using a page break, or section break, but I got in a mess with it. So, if I’m printing the manuscript, I print the last page with no mf, then go back and put the mf in and print the rest. If I’m submitting an electronic story I just take mf out and hope that the page numbering and the word ‘ends’ will be sufficient.

  16. Roy Ernest Hare

    Thank you Sue for your comments on ‘Ever Bean Had.’
    I think the reason for not wanting to write descriptions is because if I am reading a book I skip over them. Years ago I was told to use descriptions because my readers would not have an imaginative mind like mine.
    I shall take your advice and try harder even though I will suffer.
    I have you on my favourites list now.
    Commaless Roy.

    • Hi Commaless Roy,

      I know what you mean about descriptions – some turn into a list of facts, which is tedious, and doesn’t move the story forward. The answer is to tuck little bits in here and there, so that you don’t get those great chunks that you tend to skim over. You can sometimes weave description into characterisation, too, such as ‘worried blue eyes’, which tells us two things about the character in question.

      Thanks for the ‘favourite’.
      Sue

  17. 13artiag

    Hi Sue,
    Thank YOu so much for this link. I think this should really help.
    Arti (LSJ)

    Arti

  18. Hi Sue,
    Great advice and I’ve shared this link with some loops. Your Presentation link is excellent.
    Serena

  19. Hi Sue, Thank you so much for your helpful critique of my short story ‘Dance Like a Butterfly’ and this great advice on presentation. I have a question about inverted commas. I notice in your example you use single speech marks. Are there any rules for when I should use single or double? One magazines asks for double for speech and single for thoughts. Would I be penalised in a competition if I get it wrong? Thank you.
    Tana.

    • Hi Tana,

      I don’t think you’d ever be penalised, but different magazines do have different house styles, so there’s no harm in conforming to them. I like single quotes but some magazines ask for double. The only time I use double is for quotes within quotes. That is: ‘Your “friendly insults” are really not that friendly.’ If I used double quotes for the dialogue, then I’d reverse that and use single for the quote within a quote. “Your ‘friendly insults’ are really not that friendly.”

      Glad that the critique was useful! :-)

  20. I’ve skimmed all the comments here but see nobody who’s mentioned that, contrary to your own advice in your Presentation sample, the footer on the last page was not empty. You did indicate the end of the story with the “ends” but you also left in the “mf” and the explanatory footer on the last page. Confusing.

    • Hi Peter,
      You’re absolutely right. But I have simply failed to find a way to get my Word package (Word:Mac 2008) not to have the footer on every page. In other versions of Word I’ve had, there was a box to tick if you wanted to omit the footer from a certain page, but, from what others have told me, Word has simply stopped offering this option. If you know a way that I can do it, I’ll be happy to hear.

      NB When I send mss out in the post, I remove the footer, print the last page, put the footer back in and print the rest.
      Best,
      Sue

  21. Suzie Dodd

    Hello Sue,
    Thank you for advising me to read your presentation page; it has been really helpful. After all this time I thought I had cracked the presentation of my MS, however, it appears I’ve been getting a few things wrong without realising it! I was taught typewriting skills and have been treating Word in the same way. I do find some computer techniques a bit problematic to master, but I’ll keep trying. The habit of leaving two spaces after a full stop will be a tricky one to break, so I’ve put a post-it note on my lap top to remind me.
    Thanks for my story critique and the useful info on this site.

    • Hi Suzie,
      Glad it’s helpful. The two spaces thing is a problem. I was trained as you were, but then I went to work in preproduction for a sports newspaper and when you get shouted at every time you leave two spaces in, it speeds up your training substantially! Worst case, you could always do a global Find & Replace on each document. Just tap the space bar twice in the Find box and once in the Replace box.

  22. Suzie Dodd

    Hi Sue,
    will try your suggestion – many thanks. Can I ask; I have written a children’s novel in the typewritten way. Do you think I will have to re-type the entire MS in ‘computer speak’ or is there a way around this problem? Any help is much appreciated.

    • I would try and avoid retyping the whole thing. There must be ways around it. One that springs to mind is to highlight the entire document (you might want to work on a duplicate, now I think of it!) and strip it of formatting. The way in which you do this will vary from version to version of Word but, in mine, you would go to the Styles menu and click on ‘strip formatting’. (Look it up in your Help menu, if you can’t find it. Or search on YouTube for a tutorial.) You can then work on the document afresh. For eg, highlight the entire document and do the Format>Paragraph>first line indent thing to get the majority of the manuscript in shape. Do the Find and Replace on two spaces that I recommend above. NB If you strip the formatting, it strips EVERYTHING. So any italics or bold or underline instructions will have to be put back in manually. But, still, better than retyping the entire document, in my view. NB again, if you are making changes to the whole document, highlight the whole document. This is easily done by clicking Control (or Command, on a Mac) and A. Or Select All from your Edit menu.
      Good luck!

  23. Suzie Dodd

    Many thanks, Sue, I will give that a go!

    • Bill Dunnakey

      A point worth mentioning to Suzie’s editing of a whole document. It is worth saving a new copy of your document, under a new file name (ie original file name, revision1.doc), to work on. Then you still have the original document if anything goes wrong

      • Suzie Dodd

        Hello Bill,
        Yes, thanks for that helpful comment. I’ve already copied my doc in another name as I’m trying to strip formatting the doc as I speak. I hope I get it right!

      • I agree, Bill, which is why I said that Suzie might like to work on a duplicate. Then the original is always there to go back to, should disaster strike. Another good thing is to email the document to yourself, or, even better, to a web-based email address if yours isn’t. Then that version will be backed up away from your computer. Dropbox works, too.

  24. Suzie Dodd

    Thanks for all the great advice; much appreciated!

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